Прошу уделить пару минут внимания
помимо написания стихов, я попробовала написать отрывок для песни и прошу оценить🫂🧷
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I close my eyes
My world has faded out
Am I worthy to exist?
Please do not leave me here behind
I don't wanna suffer and cry
I need to climb the path
But every step feels like a lie
And all I feel is bitter wrath.

All my feelings were crushed
I don't know what's wrong with me
I took a step and rushed
Nowhere left for me to flee
I'm falling down (dawn dawn dawn down)
Help me if you can I give my heart to you here
But please just dont to leave me there